Submitted by Corey Rollins on Mon, 10/06/2008 - 11:02.
Same feedback as the runway model version.
Awesome concept that could be a multi format campaign.
Again, the call to action at the top reveals the joke too early. If all of the text could blend into the silly photo I think that would be much more rewarding. Like the chalk board you've used. Even going as far to make it look like it's actually in chalk.
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Another great example
Submitted by Corey Rollins on Mon, 10/06/2008 - 11:02.Same feedback as the runway model version.
Awesome concept that could be a multi format campaign.
Again, the call to action at the top reveals the joke too early. If all of the text could blend into the silly photo I think that would be much more rewarding. Like the chalk board you've used. Even going as far to make it look like it's actually in chalk.
Another great concept Ken!
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